Decently funny, good animation. The bit with the severed Toad head was held out for a bit too long, in my opinion. Also, he joke following it didn't make much sense. Still, relatively enjoyable waste of a minute. Keep it up.
Thanks for the feedback!
Who hasn't submitted their first piece with dreams of making it big on the front page someday? I know I have. I applaud your tenacity; I hope you make it one day.
Onto the flash.
I think the most enjoyable part was the blend of pencil drawing and animation. The switch between the two seemed so effortless, and it barely changed the quality of the movie. I think that speaks volumes for your skills as an animator. The entire movie had a tongue-in-cheek plea that I liked.
Your voice recording was the only weak point. I don't know if it was intentional, but the quality wasn't outstanding and it was sometimes difficult to understand you (without the accent, of course :D). The background music was pleasant and not distracting.
Overall, I think that if you applied the same level of animation to a serious flash and improved the sound quality, you could definitely make the front page. Good luck to you!
I'm glad you enjoyed the style, I really wanted to see if I could make it work and its nice to see someone picked up on it.
Your comments are very valuable and I thank you so much for taking the time to watch and review, it helps me to want to continue with my efforts. Thank you :)
Quick 'n Quirky
I like that you took a single joke and made a flash for it. Shows some commitment.
The voices were both pretty good, and I liked the animation. At the second scene, the siren did sort of drown out the investigator's speech, but I still got the joke.
I liked the fact that it was quick and to the point; no need to save this for another flash. It's like a bite-sized movie. If you could make something longer, with the same quality of humor and animation, I'd be handing a 10 out easy. Make more like this, please.
Yeah I like my jokes pretty short,sweet, and to the point.
I don't have a great microphone so my sound quality somewhat suffers.
I should have added to the description it only took me an hour because I had a lot of other work to do. Just wanted to pump the idea out, nothing fancy.
My next one I am working on should be better animated by a long shot.
Thanks again man! Feedback is awesome.
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